Hi

Could do with any advice. I've just finished a pilot episode which I'm about to convert into a professional format.

Have looked about the forum and read some interesting posts.

Not sure I'm ready to share my script yet, but need a few tips on how much 'Actions' to include before I send it off. Struggling to envisage someone reading it without a synopsis, and a little on-screen direction.

Brynne

Send it off where?

hi

to anyone in the industry that might want to read it. A successful script writer that has worked with Jimmy McGovern has said he'll read the pilot and first episode, which is great, but I don't want to give it to him without having first got some of the inevitable 'snagging' tidied up. I'm a novice, which is why I'm here.

brynne

Hi , welcome to BCG!

Post a few pages in the Critique section if you want some opinions.

Hi and welcome!

Thanks for warm welcome. Yes Beaky, I think I will do that soon.