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Package: 1-page bullet point feedback

For an early draft of your sitcom, I'd recommend a single page of bullet point feedback. 

The summary will look at whether characters work or not, plot points and plot holes and whether I laughed or not. If there's space, I'll add some ideas about what to look at going forward.  

I'd recommend this because many writers want 'sounding board' feedback at an early stage (first or second draft) so that they can make shifts on areas that they kinda know needs work but need a second pair of eyes to help find the gaps. 

£35