Thanks guys! That's really useful feedback. I think we had a bit of a nightmare to be honest ha! We had written a 30 minute episode (happy to send you that script if anyone wanted to take a look) that wasn't too bad - we had got some where with it in terms of production companies etc. However, some of the feedback we were getting was around making a taster to see how this thing would play on screen given it's such a static location.
So we filmed what we filmed above but we'd rushed the filming script (it wasn't part of the 30 minute stuff we'd written) and then we cobbled together the filming as we only had 2 hours to film. Really, we need to write a much better and more thought out short script and then give ourselves enough time to film it.
So I think these comments are probably reconfirming what we feared and that is that it's all a bit rushed.
Thanks so much for watching, and for taking the time out to feedback to us.
P.s. actors were great and would highly recommend them if anyone wanted to use them for anything they did in the future.