British Comedy Guide

The Road to Stand Up Page 2

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Marc P

  • Friday 13th May 2011, 1:41pm
  • England
  • 17,698 posts

Good man. And good delivery!

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Park Bench

  • Friday 13th May 2011, 2:58pm
  • Crewe, England
  • 310 posts

I'm beginning to wonder if I've actually gone crazy. You know, like the people who enter singing competitons, when they obviously can't sing, but get egged on ?
I woke up this morning at 4am and thought of a comic sketch, which I typed out on my iPod. Now, as fears are magnified during the night, maybe my comic talent was too ?
Either way, I'm gonna sort this one properly. Strip the content down and make it work. Well that or get pissed, video it and upload it to YouTube. Soooo many choices.

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BuryBob

  • Saturday 14th May 2011, 11:13am
  • England, United Kingdom
  • 140 posts

I know where you're coming from. In fact its the craziness that drives the humour sometimes. Go with it, if it flops, it flops. Viagra is available in extreme cases.

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Shandonbelle

  • Saturday 14th May 2011, 3:49pm
  • England
  • 6,571 posts

That worked really well PB I thought, strong intro and ending too which made it appear professional.
The jokes were funny, I especially liked the drugs one - 'does this face look like..

Also the going down south one, and the nose looks bigger without the beard one :)

I think you come across well and audiences would like you

Well done

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Park Bench

  • Saturday 14th May 2011, 6:31pm
  • Crewe, England
  • 310 posts

Thanks for that positive feedback.

Had to not shave for a week, just for the 'razor & mirror' gag. How I suffer for my art. Still, things will get better when I start to do the alcoholic ones.

:)

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Derek Thompson

  • Wednesday 25th May 2011, 5:56pm
  • Cornwall, England
  • 31 posts

The Road to Stand Up - is it paved with good inventions?