Hostage Page 2

Great idea and well executed. Might be a little dark when she starts chopping off fingers but overall very good.

I really like it. Brilliant twist!

That's good, no trim required.

Haha, I could imagine Lee Evans playing the part of the Man ... The script seems like it would fit him perfectly!! :D

What about his socks?

haha I liked it. Could kind of imagine this in "Jam" or "Big Train".

I'm no professional, but I do know what I do and don't find funny, and I could picture this, and it made me laugh. I think you could do something with music too - where the music is overdubbed, and the moment HE snaps out of the roleplay, is the moment he stops the music that might be on tape for example.

I liked it though personally.

Sounds good Renny thanks and thanks to everyone else too.