Sample From My Sitcom Page 2

Because you were first, heh.

Hi,
I like the characterisations and I also like the gags. I feel that the dumb character's lines need to be interspersed with other stuff to make the dumb remarks hit the audience. Also, relating them to situations often hits the spot.
I liike!

Quote: Kirk @ August 30, 2006, 4:28 PM

May I ask why this post is pinned? I don't mind, was just curios :)

Er... not sure. I'll un-pin it now, I've got so used to it being there it'll feel weird when it drops from the top.