Edit: link removed.
Seems I gave out the wrong impression on here.

do you actually want feedback or just compliments? If you're after the latter you should postit in showcase not critique

It's my first foray into writing, so I was hoping for thoughts on how it's going and maybe some pointers.
I'm not looking for anyone to kiss my arse, but I'm not looking for anyone to give me a hard time either

ok I'll do neither