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Changes - Ep 5 Foodfight - Sitcom Episode -30 pages

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stevyweevy

  • Thursday 17th October 2019, 3:41am
  • London, United Kingdom
  • 11 posts

Hi there,
Kinda feels like there are tumbleweeds blowing through this forum!

At any rate this is one of a 6 episode season (I posted Loveline here as well) for this sitom Iv'e created called "Changes" which is basically a slightly sureal inter-generational comedy. Iv'e gone a funny way about develeloping it and am actually writing the pilot now, which I'll hopefully post in a month.

The logline is:

John, forlorn and 40-something, has recently divorced and moved into an inner city block of 4, escaping the shackles of suburbia and befriending his 20 and 30 year old neighbors (Max and Kate). Youthful folly and the wisdom of age combine (well crash really) as our offbeat inter-generational trio navigate the curiosities of modern life.

Link is here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/g911oic53p1am3y/Episode_3_foodfight_17.10.19.pdf?dl=0

Any constructive criticism most welcome, happy to script swap if someone has a sitcom they're working on!

Thanks in advance!

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beaky

  • Thursday 17th October 2019, 3:33pm
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,703 posts

I only get the title page from your link. If you could put up the first ten pages on the forum, people would be more likely to read it.

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Lazzard

  • Thursday 17th October 2019, 3:42pm
  • Ludlow, England
  • 4,642 posts

I got the full PDF from that link...?

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stevyweevy

  • Friday 18th October 2019, 1:22am
  • London, United Kingdom
  • 11 posts

That's weird, that link definitely works for me too, maybe click, give it a minute to download and then scroll down?

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beaky

  • Friday 18th October 2019, 9:37am
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,703 posts

Still no joy. This is with a fairly new MacBook.

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stevyweevy

  • Saturday 19th October 2019, 11:54pm
  • London, United Kingdom
  • 11 posts

Maybe you have pop-ups blocked on your browser.

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beaky

  • Sunday 20th October 2019, 1:01pm
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,703 posts

Don't know - isn't that a good thing? Cant think why that should affect dropbox.