Last Orders - Sitcom Pilot

Hi guys,

Posted a snippet of this months ago (an unedited rush).

It took over a year, but the post-production is finally done.

Link here: https://www.youtube.com/embed/fpNr2kG_YI0?vq=hd1080

In hindsight, we were wild eyed and overly ambitious. We set out to do a 24 page script in 2 days filming. Pages were being cut and amended on the fly.

Still a vast undertaking and I'm very proud, and grateful to all the actors, crew and post production people who volunteered to help.

Enjoy,
Tom

Hi

That was enjoyable, slick, very well produced and for a sample sitcom you seemed to be working effectively within your budget.

But if you want some feedback

1 The theme music is horrible

2 Titles at the beginning? You're not the Avengers all it does is make people wait an extra 31 seconds.

3 It's 3 minutes before the first joke. And then it's a good one, I really liked that not having read the book stuff very naturalistic

4 The laptop joke also nice bit of character comedy.

5 You could make the joke about the flash wanker at the bar being actually a junior member of staff clearer.

But overall good stuff.

Isn't that her out of the Inbetweeeners movie? The fat bird Jay ends up with (not a fat bird now though)