Hi Grenford

Happy to work with you, but maybe pop something up in critique give us all a feel for what you're about?

I might be illiterate but you see there is no law against it .. I can write I will do it how I like

Thank you. Sootyj I will I have a brain faster than my hands ...

No worries, I think it's just easier than waiting for others to contact you

Poem ..

Tightly wrapped all colours for your sight . Odd shapes and sizes to squash and to squish .. Eagerly wait for the days to disappear hark, we hear joys and cheerying screams of Fun no more tightly wrapped colours moulded in one .The odd shapes are no more squashie or squishble . Merry Christmas .

What' did you think sootyj.

"Eagerly wait for the days to disappear hark, we hear joys and cheerying screams of Fun no more tightly wrapped colours moulded in one"

This bit actually sounds quite nice. Dunno what it means. Ketamine?

"squishy/squashie/squash/squish (etc.)"

These bits are a bit crap.

"Merry Christmas"

Sounds like the completely abrupt and detached way Karl Pilkington might end a poem.

A www. Simon. Thanxs for you Input ..