Hey everyone!

Just signed up here this afternoon. Looking forward to getting involved and networking with a few people.

I am at the beginning stages of trying to film some scenes from a comedy sketch show I have created and wondered if you could give me some honest feedback from the 2 short scenes I have filmed, editing and written below....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i-koSRdVgkw

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aT1AdeFyueo&context=C333e674ADOEgsToPDskLnIKS96KHlEMf7S9L3824q

I still have a lot more scenes that I feel are better, but due to budget reasons and getting people to help for nothing, it is all I could film at the moment, I hope to do some more scenes and start to get a following on YouTube, any feedback is more than welcome.

Thanks so much in advance.

Christian

Hi Christian, welcome. You'll get a better response is you post a dedicated feedback thread in the Critique forum.

Ah okay,

Thanks a lot Aaron