Basketball Trash Talk Fail
I've watched most of the video (it's 8 minutes long) not because I wasn't enjoying it, but because YouTube froze on me.
It's good fun, very believable, well acted (that was acting wasn't it?) and well edited The main character is well formed.
However, it's length may put off a lot of internet viewers. 8 minutes is a long time online, particularly when the start suggests that it will be a monalogue (there's more to it than that) It might have worked better as a shorter 3-4 min video and a 3-4 min sequel.
All in all though I would say this is well worth a watch when compared to the average fare posted on YouTube.