I must admit when I first started watching my heart was in my mouth because I could see how nervous you were. I thought you were going to be doing some magic you were twirling your hand so much! But as others have said it went well although it started to lag at the midway point and you repeated topics quite alot, I think you mentioned your pink clogs about twenty times. Whereabouts are you from? As Frankie said you have an interesting voice, I can't quite work out the regionality.

Good luck with the stand-up Joe!

You looked petrified, but somehow you made it work for you. As for advice, I imagine that if you simply keep at it, you could get really good.