A sketch to be critiqued

New sketch. It's on the website and it's called Work Experience 1

http://www.tompk.cjb.net/home.htm

Hi Tom

Yeah, I liked this one. Original idea I thought. Made me chuckle. Could do with a couple more one-liners in there 1/3 and 2/3s of the way through if you were going to rewrite, just to keep the viewer interested.

Dan

Thanks for looking Dan, I'll take your advice into account