New Comedy Song - Opinions/Critique please :)

Hi guys,

Here's my new Comedy Song - it's about reality just not matching our expectations just a little bit :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QL7YnVIykhQ

What do you reckon?
Opinions/Critique please - gonna go perform it in public soon enough :)

Enjoy!

Cheers,
FunnyOddSongs.