Hello All,

We are trying to competent flow and foster a visual story. Here is the link.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1nZTnLsnvKU

Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

We are just starting out, a little over a year now. Making short usually satirical 5 min or less skits that we post on a few sites, however this one is the only site I've seen where you can actually get helpful feedback.

So the sketch is a mock psa set in the 1980s about the dangers of sexual faxing; "saxing," which is a purposely "overblown" in our attempt to poke fun at the aim of the psa game in the usa. ex. marijuana madness and there are a few others..

It looked really good but I just didnt really get it. I'm sure you have excellent stuff I just didnt get this particular one.