Just a topical quickie I wrote whilst reading the paper.

GORDON STANDING AT MIRROR CONFUSED LOOKING AT MAKE-UP BRUSH. ALISTAIR DARLING STANDS OUT OF SHOT.

GORDON:
How does this go on Alistair ? I can't bloody work it out.

ALISTAIR COMES INTO SHOT OVERLY MADE UP. ORANGE FACED AND BRIGHT WHITE TEETH.

ALISTAIR:
More is less Gordon, more is less. Pile it on you'll look brilliant.

GORDON:
And you're sure everybody's wearing it...Men as well ?

ALISTAIR:
Everybody does it Gord, look here comes David.

ENTER DAVID MILLIBAND IN FULL CLOWN MAKE UP

Not for me I'm afraid. Sorry.

Maybe the punchline could be Dale Winton coming into shot?

Would probably work quite well visually, I reckon. Loses something written down though.

Dan

Quote: swerytd @ May 12 2009, 8:38 AM BST

Would probably work quite well visually, I reckon. Loses something written down though.

Dan

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I get that a lot ! Not sure if it's my writing or not. Always seem's funny in my head. I done a re-work on this theme and think it worked better, I posted it as well.

Oh I liked this but I'd have Alistair drawing his eyebrows on with magic marker.

Otherwise a nice neat sketch.

Not sure if that is actually a criticism! Surely it should be better visually

There's nothing wrong with it, I mean. I can't suggest anything that could be improved.

Dan

That was an oh of enthusiasim like you get in adult movies.

I was talking about my crit. I didn't realise sooty had slid one in there without my knowledge... o-err missus.

Dan