David Battenberg

Join nature expert David Battenberg in his new show 'Bush Life.'
Five reviews are needed, thanks guys! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfrnSqNxrbQ

I would have laughed but you'd already told us the 'plot' edit your post :D

There's a great sketch buried in a terrible one here.

The bit at 1.28 is actually surprising funny and damn quick.

There's no need to have 90 seconds of Attenborough bating, bad vagina puns and dated Clarkson references.

Play that bit straight and the very funny punchline will reallly sing.

nb here's my effort at an Attenborough skit

https://www.comedy.co.uk/forums/thread/19206/

Loved the bit about sending up the pomposity of BBC toffs, even though it old ground. Liked the voice over, it worked for me. The cat joke was too obvious and the digital counter was off putting. Your David character has potential, but your script was empty. One gag and no story. I'd be interested in seeing David track down other wildlife it's a theme that could repeat easily.