Peer feedback wanted on 2 short film scripts

Hi everyone, I'm looking for some feedback to develop my scripts, would anyone be interested in offering me some? They are 2 short film comedy scripts
Thanks!

I'd be interested. Can I read them.

Sure if you want to put them in critique

Hi there, I would be happy to help you out. If you could PM me and I will give you my Email address.

Thanks! :)