Comedy short: One man and his sex doll

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwOOiSlv6IA

Hi My name is Nadine,

I would love some feedback on this short video, any reposes are greatly appreciated.

Thank you kind strangers :)

Nadine x

I like it.... Thought it was well produced, very good choice of music and kind of charming... Maybe could have pushed the end a little further along the story....

Sorry, not my cup of tea. More disturbing than funny.

Well made, esp the music, but I'm afraid I didn't get anything out of it, really - and certainly not a laugh. :(

I agree with gappy, in terms of production it's solid. However I just don't think there's a joke there. It wasn't something that made me laugh.

Very good Nadine. If you are ever in North norfolk you can film me.

Quote: Marc P @ 3rd December 2014, 7:20 AM GMT

Very good Nadine. If you are ever in North norfolk you can film me.

With your sex doll?

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The acting in the video brings back fond memories of Zzzap!, though I'm not sure it would work as kids TV. Huh?

I've never tried a sex doll. To be honest I am scared I would let her down.

I hear that when the dolls nose runs - you have to empty it.

Hear you say? Was it a friend who told you? ;)

Hi, and thank you for the feedback! It had been very helpful.

Kind regards

Nadine