Could everyone be amazing and leave a list the positives and negatives for this video please, thankyou very much: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfrnSqNxrbQ This is for a mini biography, so the more professional the reviews the better. Ideally 3 positives (if any) and 3 negatives, thankyou!
Also, I apologise for posing this link gain, I cannot delete the previous thread.

Asking for favourable reviews is a bit gauche around here, mostly people are looking for feedback.

Why not try Facebook or Chortle.

Except Chortle isn't as firendly....

Yes, this sounds a little too much like homework.

Why ten reviews?
Why three good, three bad points?
One seems to be given minimum standards for something which is actually a free favour.

I would just like to know how to further improve my technique, as well as gain the knowledge as to what I am currently good at.

Feedbacks one thing, reviews another.

You need to post more stuff (just text is fine) and give feedback to other writers.

Takes a while.