"Welcome to Mastermind. Name please?"

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"Your name is?"

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"Your name is?"

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*Fine* "specialist subject?"

<Into mic> "Slim Shady."

very nice, if a little dated

I still live in 1998 so it's funny to me

I like the idea
But I think line 4 distracts from the rhythm a bit
So for me it's definitely one that works better written down than it would in performance.

I'm liking the style of quickies you're doing at the mo Nick

It's a shame you weren't here a year or two back when critique was a lot more lively

Quote: Steve Sunshine @ 6th February 2015, 8:44 PM GMT

I like the idea
But I think line 4 distracts from the rhythm a bit
So for me it's definitely one that works better written down than it would in performance.

I'm liking the style of quickies you're doing at the mo Nick

It's a shame you weren't here a year or two back when critique was a lot more lively

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Cheers Steve. I've endless ideas and some are hit and miss, just don't want to feel like I'm clogging up in here, especially if nobody is around that often.

It needs people to post stuff to get it going again
You may inspire a few of us old codgers to put more stuff in

Quote: Steve Sunshine @ 6th February 2015, 9:01 PM GMT

It needs people to post stuff to get it going again
You may inspire a few of us old codgers to put more stuff in

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Does that chat up line ever work at age concern

Quote: sootyj @ 7th February 2015, 12:54 AM GMT

Does that chat up line ever work at age concern

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It would only work if the words said matched the lyrics. And they don't so I don't think the sketch works I'm afraid. Sorry.

Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ 10th February 2015, 12:39 PM GMT

It would only work if the words said matched the lyrics. And they don't so I don't think the sketch works I'm afraid. Sorry.

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Cheers for your input.