Not sure if I've already posted this for review, but what the hell.

So I wrote this before I got into the full swing of comedy, this was the transitional point of going from movie script writing - comedy writing, but just before sitcom and sketch writing.

It was my attempt at the Airplane, Young Frankenstein and (spits) Scary Movies.

http://pc.celtx.com/project/XTHIu2jfb4LE/view/http://my.celtx.com/res/Wy1CX2iiM18v

I'm thinking of picking it back up and starting a fresh with my new fangled knowledge of comedy and writing techniques.

I just want to know what you, and may I say beautiful, intelligent people think.