New comedy short from Essex

Hello fellow comedy people,

Here's a new sketch we put together

Hope you enjoy it. Would be great to get some feedback on our twitter @agentlemensclub . Always up for helping promote other artists too

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uIxNPde9lPA

Didn't do much for me. The performances were nothing special, the script saggy, the jokes stale and the duration punishing. Suggest working on something closer to a 2 min length and making that work. Looked pretty, mind you.