Hi All
Here is a new video from the crappily named Mr Chicken Chops!
Its a little extract from a longer and never made documentary about the legendary Bobby Danson as told by the folk that knew him.
I know this is the showcase thread but I would happily have critical feedback in here as well if anyone wants to take the time to do it!
Lots of Love
Chicken Chops
Nice! The guy on the left is much less starey-eyed by the end, and personally I think that's an improvement. I like the fact that the guy on the right is always coming out with comments which are off-message and kind of spoiling the story. I also like the bit about the hospital not being able to help people with broken legs because they've all gone out searching for Bobby; I like the cutaways to black-and-white photographs; the way the story progresses (nice touch about Esmerelda's house being burnt down); and the finishing line.
I didn't think this was going to be much good when it started, but once you get used to the idiom I think it really works.