Anyone got a sketch they've given up on? One you just can't seem to finish? I'm pretty crap at coming up with the initial idea, but once someone gives me one, I'm off, whooosh!
Post it here or email me if you wish: lee@leevil.co.uk
I need to do some creativity!
MAN: Hi
...
Please can you finish this sketch off for me? 
Seriously, I know what its like to struggle with an ending. And other times I don't know when to
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Ah, you must be here for my daughter?
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Yeah, hello!
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Yeah, hi.
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Are you taking the piss?
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Right, that's it! I'm closing the door!
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Shuddup!
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: Arrghhhhhhhh!!!
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: I really want to punch you, but my daughter would kill me.
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: I've already broken her other bloody Hi man.
END.
that's actually one of the funniest sketches I've read on here. i love inane humour.
Reminded me of one of my favourite characters, the man who adorns my desktop, the shut up man
Quote: Nick Rivers @ October 9, 2007, 4:27 PMthat's actually one of the funniest sketches I've read on here. i love inane humour.
Reminded me of one of my favourite characters, the man who adorns my desktop, the shut up man
Thank you, it was a joint effort.
Quote: ContainsNuts @ October 9, 2007, 4:34 PMThank you, it was a joint effort.
alternative ending
OTHER MAN: I really want to punch you, but my daughter would kill me.
MAN: Hi.
OTHER MAN: I've already broken her other bloody Hi man. [EXITS]
MAN: Bye
OTHER MAN: (RUSHES BACK) What did you say?
MAN: Hi
END.
In fact I like that sketch so much I'd like to animate it. think it'd suit a really bad animation which i could probably russle up pretty quickly. Is that OK? PM/ e-mail me if you're up for it.
I'm struggling with one of my sketches, it just needs beating with a stick I think? 
You can animate it, as long as you give ContainsNuts the credit, if it wasn't for him, well, let's just say the world would be a much poorer place, sorry, richer place.
It's not bad that Lee mate if you're into incest gags!
Hi men would have been slightly funnier!?
Great stuff though!!!
Quote: Leevil @ October 9, 2007, 5:03 PMYou can animate it, as long as you give ContainsNuts the credit, if it wasn't for him, well, let's just say the world would be a much poorer place, sorry, richer place.
Its a team effort. I put the 'muse' in amusement.
I think you should split that one even stevens 95% / 5% !!!
Quote: Frankie Rage @ October 9, 2007, 5:42 PMI think you should split that one even stevens 95% / 5% !!!
No, Leevil should get more than 5%, how about 95% / 10% ?
Leevil just needs a bunch of bananas throwing in every now and then.. 
Aren't I a wag?
Quote: Nick Rivers @ October 9, 2007, 4:44 PMIn fact I like that sketch so much I'd like to animate it. think it'd suit a really bad animation which i could probably russle up pretty quickly. Is that OK? PM/ e-mail me if you're up for it.
I have the feeling you just don't want to hear another one of my audio recordings, so you quickly jump in before I get the chance.
Hey, Leevil, I've hit upon a great idea. I'll start with one line - you write a series - and I'll take 95% of the profits. You in?