Pretty sure this has been done before but just in case.

EXT. ROAD. DAY.

A POLICEMAN HAS PULLED ASIDE A MOTORIST, THEY STAND BY THE SIDE OF THE MOTORISTS VECHICLE. THE POLICEMAN IS ADMINISTERING A BREATH TEST.

POLICE
Blow in here sir.

THE MAN DOES SO. THE MACHINE MAKES A NEGATIVE NOISE.

POLICE
Sorry sir I'm gonna have to ask you to do that again.

UPON EXAMINING THE BREATHLYZER WE NOTICE THE IS A TUBE COMING OUT OF IT. WE FOLLOW THE TUBE TO REVEAL:

EXT. FIELD. DAY.

A GAGGLE OF KIDS AND PARENTS STAND DEJECTED ROUND A DEFLATED BOUNCY CASTLE.

Very good. Nice and comical. Me likey.

Sorry, your instinct was right. Think it was on Smith and Jones, and the guy was inflating a flat tyre on a squad car.

Quote: Timbo @ August 16 2009, 8:44 PM BST

Sorry, your instinct was right. Think it was on Smith and Jones, and the guy was inflating a flat tyre on a squad car.

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Hey don't be sorry, seemed obvious to me, but as I said put it out there, I've probably watched too many sketch shows...

I seem to frequently get the feeling I've seen a lot of sketches on critque done before... probably me just over-thinking them.

This was on old one of mine just tickled me when I came across it... hmmm wonder if it was in the package I sent to smith and jones... LOL

Nice but it has indeed been done by Smith and Jones and a rather old joke about Blonds and blowjobs.

Quote: sootyj @ August 16 2009, 8:59 PM BST

Nice but it has indeed been done by Smith and Jones and a rather old joke about Blonds and blowjobs.

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The blond and blowjobs definitly wasn't one of mine

As I say, I think I've just watched too many sketch shows over the years and sometimes obvious jokes \ seen it before blend into one, but as seen on citique on occasion some people love the obvious \ seen it before (which bodes well for most of my stuff then )

I wouldn't worry there are very few good original jokes.

Famously the Parrot Sketch was originally written in Ancient Rome about dead slaves.

Every time I come up with an idea for a sketch, my first thought is, 'someone must have done this before'. (And they probably have!)

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Every time I come up with an idea for a sketch, my first thought is, 'someone must have done this before'. (And they probably have!)

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Yep, I'm glad that's not just me then...

'This is just to obvious isn't it, someone MUST have done this'

Nice, didn't see that coming, but I kinda guessed something like that would happen with the name bouncy gd work