Hi All

Ready to take a critical kicking (but happy to take onboard any advice) but have been doing these short topical skits and looking for any advice on improvement Link is below. Thank you in advance.

https://www.tiktok.com/@fuzzydicecomedy

My main advice would be to take the shades off, so it feels as though you're talking to the viewer and communicating. I've never made equivalent videos though, and don't really watch such things, so ignore at your leisure