Most Offensive Stand Up Ever?!

Hey guys!

Please check out this vid of my latest stand up!

Not looking to be critiqued on it (as have had that off of other comedians, promoters, friends over the time I've been doing stand up)

Just hoping to get some eyes on it and if it's your cup of tea then you can give it a like or share or whatever.

Happy to check out anyones work as well or give advice or whatever it is you're looking for.

Cheers!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ysOtxAecxgw

Tries to be most offensive comedian ever = Im a total jerk

You're a pretty respectable comic, you time your jokes well and they're clearly constructed with punchlines.

Yes you come across as a bit nervous, but that will pass.

Now stop focussing on being as offensive as possible. It's a career dead end that will limit you.

You can write jokes and tell them, just broaden your approach.

I quite liked it - though it's hardly offensive. I disagree with sootyj, you should go more offensive

All interesting responses... even from the guy that called me a jerk lol