Sketch : The Knock

Just thought I`d try another sketch before I venture into uploading a scene from some sitcom stuff I`m writing.Any views most welcome.

The Knock

INT.HOUSE.ANYWHERE.THE CURTAINS ARE DRAWN.A GROUP OF MEN ALL DRESSED IN WOMENS CLOTHES ARE SEEN CHATTING AND LAUGHING.MUSIC PLAYS LOW IN THE BACKGROUND.OUR LEAD MALE HENRY IS SEEN AS HE MINGLES WITH THE MEN.

HENRY: Frank! How are you?Hows the wife keeping?Well?

FRANK NODS.

HENRY: Good,Good,and the dress? One of hers?

FRANK NODS AGAIN.

HENRY MOVES OFF AND STARTS TO TALK TO ANOTHER MAN.

HENRY: Eric![FAKES A KISS ON BOTH OF HIS CHEEKS]Great to see you.Have you lost weight?That skirt looks delight...

THERES A LOUD KNOCK AT THE DOOR.THE ROOM FALLS SILENT.HENRY WALKS TO THE WINDOW AND SLOWLY PEERS THROUGH A GAP IN THE CURTAINS.

HENRY: Oh my God its the...
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