Gap Year in Blandston

Hello BCG forumers!

A while ago I shared the first two episodes of my comedy web series Gap Year in Blandston and it received some really kind words and great feedback. Since then we have been working towards making our third episode (albeit with an extended holiday/pandemic in the middle).

As we are looking to step things up production-wise we have decided to enter the world of crowdfunding (or as it's known outside the wanky worlds of media and start-up business: begging people for money). As part of our month long plea to fund a part of our low budget, we will be releasing some comedy content along the way which I would love some feedback on.

The first of which is this sketch/scene/something:

https://youtu.be/k7wRPlQVGOQ

I'd really like to know what you think of the quality of the writing/jokes and if you like what you see please do check out the Kickstarter page. We have a few more sketches lined up to be released over the coming weeks so I shall pop them in here and await your wise words.

Cheers!

Shouldnt this be in the crit section for feed back