When you get pulled over by the cops...

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kev jod

  • Wednesday 6th February 2019, 3:59am
  • England
  • 34 posts

That was clever. I really liked that

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Rood Eye

  • Wednesday 6th February 2019, 9:06am
  • England
  • 1,386 posts

It's fine as far as it goes but I would have ended it with him stepping out of the car, clutching an opened whisky bottle.

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Carlos Manwelly

  • Thursday 7th February 2019, 10:48am
  • Wales
  • 1,196 posts
Quote: kev jod @ 6th February 2019, 3:59 AM

That was clever. I really liked that

Thanks for the feedback kev jod, glad you liked it :)

Quote: Rood Eye @ 6th February 2019, 9:06 AM

It's fine as far as it goes but I would have ended it with him stepping out of the car, clutching an opened whisky bottle.

Thanks Rood Eye, yes I could have maybe added that extra sillyness into it or even had him ask the policeman to hold his beer while he got out of the car.

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beaky

  • Thursday 7th February 2019, 11:18am
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,434 posts

"Hold that, will you."
Yes, that'd be a good way to finish it.
I was a bit disturbed that Carlos wasn't wearing his hat, but on the plus side we got a lovely view of his shining bonce.

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Carlos Manwelly

  • Thursday 7th February 2019, 12:13pm
  • Wales
  • 1,196 posts
Quote: beaky @ 7th February 2019, 11:18 AM

"Hold that, will you."
Yes, that'd be a good way to finish it.
I was a bit disturbed that Carlos wasn't wearing his hat, but on the plus side we got a lovely view of his shining bonce.

Cheers beaky, yes the hat doesn't fit on my head properly because I got a really small head so I decided to hold it instead. I did try but it fell over my eyes.