The Boot and The Hole

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Edward Picot

  • Sunday 2nd December 2018, 3:34pm
  • Kent, England
  • 121 posts

Not bad at all. The not-referring-to-the-thing-in-the-boot-by-name routine gets a little bit forced, but the relationship between the two characters works very well, and the closing gag works well too. There's something very 'Lock, Stock & Two Smoking Barrels' about the tone of the dialogue in this.