Hi All

It'd be great if anyone watches this: https://youtu.be/0rWD72Qdz4s and offers their thoughts and criticisms.

Feel free to comment on the script, drawings, animation, sound, acting and whatever else.

EDIT -- Some people may find the cartoon offensive so if you're easily offended it may be better not to watch.

Best Wishes
Yacob

I really liked it but...you might want to warn people it might offend.

Probably the best thing I've ever seen in Critique/Showcase. Well done.

Thanks Playfull! I've added a little note to the introductory post to give a warning that it's offensive. I may add a warning to the youtube description too.

Thanks Don Rushmore and Gappy! Very nice of you both.

I enjoyed that very much.

Hey Yacob. That was funny and sick in equal measure. But I am sick so funny wins.

Thanks Carlos and Will!

Wish I had fixed some of the animation. Particularly the guy's arm when he brings the card down (it's too jumpy) and I forgot to add the D to the card when the guy heads towards the door. Darn.