BBC Writersroom Feedback Exchange

Hi,

BBC Writersoom submissions opened yesterday and in The Comedy Crowd we are running a feedback exchange programme amongst our members for those wishing to submit (open until 4th April). For more details check out our latest newsletter - eepurl.com/bT5Qnf.

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Pete www.thecomedycrowd.com

I must get down to editing my Writersroom entry for submission. The trouble is my prose is so dull. I've decided that I can't write my usual knockabout stuff and have to calm down a bit. I think I gone too far the other way.

Ok, I'm game.

I had my script picked up recently by Sitcom Geeks on their ten page challenge so I'm looking for writers who of about that level for feedback on my nearly finished Writers Room script.

Are you good enough that James Cary can spend nearly 25 minutes talking about everything you did wrong? Wave

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