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Quote: sean quinn @ 12th August 2015, 8:39 PM BST

The type of comedy I tend to create would attract the sort of fans who love:

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Perhaps substitute 'might' for 'would'?

You still on the blob Rood?

Peter Sellers: "Anyway the door opened... this tall fellow came in and he's got a briefcase, and a scout hat, but he's got a big red beard with all this, and red knees, and socks, and all the insignia. And he said [puts on Bluebottle voice]: "Could I come in for a moment please? I have just seen Michael Bentine at Chiswick, and he said that I'm a genius!"

Can I have one productive reply here ?

A bunch of usless replies are all I have atm

Im sorry I thought people wanna do some comedy around here maybe I was wrong

Do you realise what is on the table here?

A ONCE IN A LIFE TIME SHOT AT THE BIG TIME FOLKS!

Forget plastics

YOUTUBE

Unfortunately you come across as a bit of a prat and a dreamer

Maybe you should post some of your stuff in Critique so we can see if you're any good

psp

Energy, yes, but you also need to learn how to use a bit of grammar too. Really you can only expect a partner who is more or less similar to you, so it might be hard to move forward. Try getting an editor for your work?

Ponder not on the warblings of these obstinate mossbacks, Sean. Them's but impotent cockblockers. I sense their lives were wasted inking cliches for TV commissioners. Anyway, their days are done. Go forth into YouTube and make something original.

Quote: sean quinn @ 16th August 2015, 11:57 AM BST

I wrote it and acted as the Director tell me what you think, its not great

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Show us stuff that you think is great.
I do like the ironic title to the thread though : "im a genius"

Quote: El Tea @ 20th August 2015, 8:29 PM BST

I sense their lives were wasted inking cliches for TV commissioners.

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I wish.