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Josh94

  • Thursday 16th October 2014, 8:45pm
  • United Kingdom
  • 3 posts

I'm looking for people who are willing to read and give feedback on the pilot script I have produced for a sitcom series I am working on.

Send me your email address if you would like to help out.

Thanks

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Mattytheswan

  • Thursday 16th October 2014, 9:11pm
  • England
  • 175 posts

Put some of it up in Critique Josh. I'm sure there will be people willing to read your script, or at least some of it, and give you feedback.

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beaky

  • Thursday 16th October 2014, 9:46pm
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,735 posts
Quote: Mattytheswan @ 16th October 2014, 9:11 PM BST

Put some of it up in Critique Josh. I'm sure there will be people willing to read your script, or at least some of it, and give you feedback.

Otherwise, you'll have to pay a professional.

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Craig H

  • Friday 17th October 2014, 11:45am
  • Scotland
  • 919 posts
Quote: beaky @ 16th October 2014, 9:46 PM BST

Otherwise, you'll have to pay a professional.

Although, thankfully, not always with money.

Critique is the answer Josh.

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beaky

  • Friday 17th October 2014, 6:32pm
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,735 posts
Quote: Craig H @ 17th October 2014, 11:45 AM BST

Although, thankfully, not always with money.

Sexual favours are acceptable.

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Paul Wimsett

  • Friday 17th October 2014, 6:34pm
  • Folkestone, United Kingdom
  • 3,391 posts

Champagne, chocolate, cake...?

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beaky

  • Friday 17th October 2014, 11:52pm
  • Malaga and Brighton, United Kingdom
  • 2,735 posts

The bubbly and feisty Marc to the rescue!

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Paul Wimsett

  • Saturday 18th October 2014, 8:49am
  • Folkestone, United Kingdom
  • 3,391 posts

The only professional, Marc?

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Marc P

  • Saturday 18th October 2014, 11:03am
  • England
  • 17,698 posts

You didnt need the comma.

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gappy

  • Saturday 18th October 2014, 1:07pm
  • Oxford, England
  • 2,067 posts
Quote: Marc P @ 18th October 2014, 11:03 AM BST

You didnt need the comma.

:D

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Paul Wimsett

  • Tuesday 21st October 2014, 12:35pm
  • Folkestone, United Kingdom
  • 3,391 posts
Quote: Marc P @ 18th October 2014, 11:03 AM BST

You didnt need the comma.

You might have needed an apostrophe?

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Lazzard

  • Tuesday 21st October 2014, 12:42pm
  • Ludlow, England
  • 4,770 posts
Quote: Paul Wimsett @ 21st October 2014, 12:35 PM BST

You might have needed an apostrophe?

Either way, you certainly didn't need a question mark. :)

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Marc P

  • Tuesday 21st October 2014, 12:46pm
  • England
  • 17,698 posts

I don't like to brag. ;)

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Craig H

  • Tuesday 21st October 2014, 1:25pm
  • Scotland
  • 919 posts
Quote: Marc P @ 21st October 2014, 12:46 PM BST

I don't like to brag. ;)

you didn't need the n, the t or the apostrophe that time > Marc.