- Wednesday 20th August 2014, 3:32pm
- Stourbridge, England
- 36 posts
I'm writing some new material for my debut first time on stage. Would appreciate feedback on whether or not you think this section is funny.
It's a play on the fact that it's possible to buy a greeting card for almost every occasion. Thanks.
"I've got a friend who lives up in the north of Scotland. Anyway, he's been very ill lately, so on his birthday I thought I'd send a card to cheer him up.
Luckily, I found one. It said....
'Sorry to hear that you're ill, on your birthday, from across the miles.
Seemed to do the job.
I've got another friend who's wife tragically died two days after moving into their new house. (Pause) I thought I'd send a card
Luckily I found one. It said...
"Sorry to hear about your loss, as you move into your new house"