You seem like you've got good stage presence and you get joke structure.

The rest is down to practise and writing and that's the same for everyone in comedy. The question is how bad do you want to be good/

Quote: Jack Daniels @ June 15 2011, 9:26 PM BST

Having said that I'm male and I know a lot of female comedy tends to appeal to other women, they enjoy the vagina monologues and other sisterly shenanigans.

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Careful.

That was my 6th time on stage. I'm not ready to give up just yet, I'm still learning and each time I've done it, I can see what I need to do next. I'll keep writing, practicing and listening. I've a few more local gigs lined up, so I will look at my material with this advice in mind.

The main reason I posted on here is because I want the unbiased feedback!