Well I thought I'd join in this Critiquing forum. I'm moderately happy with the sketches on my site except for this one. Any opinions or ideas to sharpen it up would be much apreciated.

http://www.shoepie.co.uk/9/index.php

(Apologies if we're not allowed to link to sites on here!)

Why wouldn't you be?!

had a look through it, was looking promising until I saw it copied the basic framwork from an episode of the simpsons

Hi Paul, thanks for your comment. How do you mean I copied the basic framework? Can you give an example of a Simpson's framework?

Or do you think I copied jokes?

I'd be interested to hear back as I love the Simpsons (I also love a lot of other things) but if i'm overly inspired by them then i can try and avoid that in the future but I dont really understand your point.

After re-reading your post I should have asked which episode?