Hi Steve

I thought the jokes were very good and it was quite snappy, but it did feel like two separate sketches glued together (the bit after Cleo leaves) and hence a little too long. I'm at a loss to tell you what you should cut though as the jokes are pretty rapid-fire and it would be a shame to lose any of them.

Croydesponger said:
"I'd say it was more boozed-up Newsrevue audience material"

That's a great idea! Have you actually sent it to News Revue? Having been, this would fit in well with their stuff, I reckon.

Cheers

Dan

Thanks Dan. I haven't sent it to anyone other than the sketch factor. I haven't written any sketches since my sixth form revue in the mid 1980's but saw that they were looking for submissions and thought I'd have a crack. I have absolutly no idea what to do with them now. Perhaps it would be worth sending to Newsrevue. Nothing to loose I guess!