Changes - Ep 5 Foodfight - Sitcom Episode -30 pages

Hi there,
Kinda feels like there are tumbleweeds blowing through this forum!

At any rate this is one of a 6 episode season (I posted Loveline here as well) for this sitom Iv'e created called "Changes" which is basically a slightly sureal inter-generational comedy. Iv'e gone a funny way about develeloping it and am actually writing the pilot now, which I'll hopefully post in a month.

The logline is:

John, forlorn and 40-something, has recently divorced and moved into an inner city block of 4, escaping the shackles of suburbia and befriending his 20 and 30 year old neighbors (Max and Kate). Youthful folly and the wisdom of age combine (well crash really) as our offbeat inter-generational trio navigate the curiosities of modern life.

Link is here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/g911oic53p1am3y/Episode_3_foodfight_17.10.19.pdf?dl=0

Any constructive criticism most welcome, happy to script swap if someone has a sitcom they're working on!

Thanks in advance!

I only get the title page from your link. If you could put up the first ten pages on the forum, people would be more likely to read it.

I got the full PDF from that link...?

That's weird, that link definitely works for me too, maybe click, give it a minute to download and then scroll down?

Still no joy. This is with a fairly new MacBook.

Maybe you have pop-ups blocked on your browser.

Don't know - isn't that a good thing? Cant think why that should affect dropbox.

https://www.dropboxforum.com/t5/Files-folders/Can-t-open-file-shared-with-me-via-Dropbox-on-this-particular/td-p/353038