Yes DaButt and Kenneth, I think the subtitles are useful and I suppose it does help with the Welsh accent just incase

With the ending for this one I agree, I was stuck on how to end it. I wanted some sort of call to action or a strapline but all the ones I came up with I didn't like or were too long, the Jehova Witness bit was something that came to me and I had enough by then and used it. Thanks for the feedback, I always take it on board.

This one is very good Carlos from start to finish and your voice overs are is getting even better.

Thanks Teddy, I was going to buy a voice over from fiver.com but even that was too much money for me to spend, so Ithought bugger it I'll use my own,