Hello!
I am back here with my new sketch CAKE featuring someone you may know from somewhere (or not )

>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWUmpJGGiV0&list=PLYRRQZRmMhXhEZwI5nHuMSYlOCZzQGLK6

Your comments (on youtube?) with thoughts/feedback much appreciate. I want to improve my writing skills so, I need peoples to tell me what I am missing

thank you