Rake Show

Apologies. I haven't posted on the forum for a number of years so please excuse the absence. Anyway, here's a short film thing I made that may or may not be of interest. Cheers.

https://vimeo.com/rakeandherald/rake-show-s1e1

Well that was random. It was well acted and put together stylishly, too. I think the bit in the misty countryside went on too long, though. Maybe you could have more material from the guy near the start. Or at least have more people talking in front of the camera. The video feels a bit impersonal (is that the right word?) and almost kind of lonely later on.