Hello All

Here's (yet another) animation of mine: https://youtu.be/TLxo_LjOYc0 .

As always, thoughts on the script, look, music, acting and anything in the animation would be most appreciated.

Yacob

Sorry Yacob that one went right over my head, the artwork is great though, I think it just needs to be a tad more mainstream in the subject matter .

Thanks Teddy!

Quote: Yacob Wingnut @ 25th June 2018, 12:04 PM

Hello All

Here's (yet another) animation of mine: https://youtu.be/TLxo_LjOYc0 .

As always, thoughts on the script, look, music, acting and anything in the animation would be most appreciated.

Yacob

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Too fast and blunt
But 'Dose' one have to be acquainted with Chompsky theory to understand this.

I think I see what the joke is, but it's rather obscure!

Quote: beaky @ 26th June 2018, 9:23 AM

I think I see what the joke is, but it's rather obscure!

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I think we should invite Chomps over to give his undiluted opinion and s**t.. ( if hes still alive of course- it would have to be medium other wise )

No Chomsky required. The joke is just a big ol' disappointment .

This might be one of mine that I like and nobody else does. Oh well. Next one will be better.