I wondered why they make lotion specifically for men so I made a song. I would love to know how we can improve for next time, but also would like to know if anything was particularly good or worked well. Thank you so much for taking the time!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ldvAVkoy-JA
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Valid target, and I like your awkward macho throwdowns, but it runs out of lyrics after a verse, and becomes boring. If you could develop it to come up with another 2 clever verses, it would be a winner.
Quote: gappy @ 2nd December 2017, 10:22 AMValid target, and I like your awkward macho throwdowns, but it runs out of lyrics after a verse, and becomes boring. If you could develop it to come up with another 2 clever verses, it would be a winner.
This is helpful. Thank you for your help! I appreciate you taking the time.