Are you fed up of those make money online videos?

Here's a guide how to make money online, well not really, it's a parody, if you follow the steps, that's on you!Ill

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4bSRhtZQpgU

Any comments, keep them to yourself. Only kidding, comedy innit, please comment away and show your friends my inbox (please request my inbox for this to be done).

I thought this was great, it was funny all the way through, and your main character was very entertaining. Maybe the bloodied knife was a little too dark. Personally, I would've exaggerated the gore so it was clear it was a joke, but it was still funny, I guess. Even the music you chose worked great, and choosing isn't easy to do. The bad tears at the end was a bit weird, but that had some funny stuff about it, too. I'll share this if you give me your inbox...

Regards, Simon the Mighty