I've just started making YouTube videos about household objects that talk to each other (as you do) and would like some feedback!
Thanks!
A conversation between a Door and an Iron...
Like the concept, but felt the conversation was a bit too flat with two apparently intentionally bland speakers.
I thought the script could either do with finishing on "unhinging" (to make it a short, sweet, deadpan sketch with a pun) or involving some other slightly less "wooden" household object characters, preferably some sort of disagreement or development to the conversation, and a veritable orgy of silly puns.
If you're going to rely so much on puns you need to get them out a lot quicker - not worth the wait otherwise.
I don't think you should've used a flat dull drawing. Would've preferred it if you had filmed a real door and an iron (not difficult). If you want to use animation then put more work into it and use some different shots.
Also I thought the voices sounded too similar.