Rules of Life - a new sitcom I have made Page 6

Quote: Steve Whyley @ 9th December 2015, 2:36 PM GMT

Thanks for this Enigmatic. I've been busy editing the web series and taking on board your comments for future episodes. We've just finished Series 1 of the Web Series. Here's the final first episode: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3LwBsPTFuPY

Anyone got any advice on how to get a web series out there and viewed by people?

Also, if anyone has any comments (positive or negative) about this first episode I'd love to hear them. Thanks!

Fair play, I quite enjoyed that.

Thought the monologue elements were pretty good, and my favourite bit was probably the surreal photographs. I also liked the performances, which are usually a bit dodgy on this sort of thing.

If there was one recommendation I'd make, it would be to find a stronger way to end it, perhaps by him having a less predictable reaction?

Unfortunately, I don't know how you'll get more hits, but would definitely recommend making some more.